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Antigone Cadmus

  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Battle with Perseus

    Hey, Elinor! So, for my review of this, all I really want to do is point out several major inaccuracies you have included. What are your sources? Edith Hamilton? Because ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Revolution [Working title]

    Thanks for your review of my Nero piece. Calling me a genius kinda sorta made my day. ;) Let's nit-pick yours a bit, shall we? The world is very bland. ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Determined: The Story of A Beautiful Jew. Chapter One.

    Now, I hate to drop in and be the annoying Jew who comments on your Holocaust novel... but... I feel I must (: אז, לפני תחילת כל ההתנצלויות! (so all ...

    Jan 25, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Stepfather

    Hey, Helpful! Here as requested! ^_^ a hinging my or the Meh. Put these in italics, please (the "the" and the "my"). I had to read the sentence outloud to ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Report of Decius Curtius

    Sorry, but Brutus and Cassius were brothers. It says so in the play. Actually, they were half-brothers (Cassius was married to Brutus's sister) but in Rome that was pretty much ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Testing the water...with an extract of mine

    Hey, Lupus! Welcome to YWS! I'm Antigone. (: Yay! Someone else who writes werewolf fiction! So do I. They're so fun to write about, huh? But! on with the review... ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Quote by Mwa!

    Mwa = Moi. ^_^ If you meants "Quotes by me", that is. Yeah. That is all. June took all the things I was going to tell you in this review. ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Lestat the Vampire A Parody

    No, I did not rush. I am only saying that this is a summary of the plot of the story. Rice's prose can be so purple and over dramatic at ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: 1st 3rd person stroy

    Hey, Mage. Antigone, here as requested. Well, it looks as though all of the nitpicks have already been taken, so I will do an overall, yes? First of all, tell ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Roses and Thorns (Part 1) - Prologue

    Heyyy, That Black Rose. ;) Yes, I'm a latin nerd. So! I'm Tigger and I'll be your reviewer today. A girl of about sixteen limped slowly up the cobblestone streets, ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Thorn: Prologue

    Hey Ellie! Ready for Caddie's first review in, like, forever? (: Nitpicks § Um... is there a real reason that you need this? Symbols are okay, but this symbol is ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Chemical Romance

    Please give credit to the author of some of these lines or this is considered plagiarism. This is basically just you giving random commentary on a My Chemical Romance music ...

    Nov 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Sweet Dreams: The First YWS Story Creator

    Several things first of all: -- This is a good idea, but perhaps it should be posted in Storybooks, and not the Literary Forums. -- Try not to use all ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mission Zero part 3

    Hey there. :] So, I was gone from YWS for awhile, and I just saw my Will Review for Food thread today. :oops: Soo, here is your very long awaited ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Lestat the Vampire A Parody

    Hi! I'm Antigone, and I'll be your reviewer for today. [= So, I'm a big Anne Rice fan, and I must admit, her characters are dreadfully easy to make fun ...

    Aug 31, 2009


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites